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sroloc_elbisivni ([personal profile] sroloc_elbisivni) wrote in [community profile] storm_sewer2022-12-26 09:25 pm

AU post: Retromiwagen

CONTINUITY: Rise

SUMMARY: post S2 AU. Draxum and Donnie create a retromutagen that Splinter uses to return to human form. The extended Hamato clan, alive and in hiding from the Foot, are extremely suspicious of the sudden reappearance of a man claiming to be Hamato Yoshi. Sixteen-year-old Hamato Miwa decides to take the initiative and investigate for herself. She didn't expect to find new, green cousins, but they're not going to stop her from sticking around to get training from the infamous black sheep of the family.
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Re: Ficlet 1

[personal profile] onallofyourdays 2022-12-27 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
I still love this so much. I think the thing that stands out to me most about this, on this particular read, is that "thirteen years"-- when you wrote this, we were still in S1, I believe? And then in S2 we learned that he got kidnapped ~30 years ago... What are your thoughts on the timeline now that we've seen the whole series?
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[personal profile] onallofyourdays 2022-12-27 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
Okayokayokay. Entry-level parts of this au. The one that stands out to me is, of course, the boys adapting to their dad suddenly being HUMAN. Like, that's SO WEIRD. He looks different, the "suddenly not getting pounded into the dirt by species dysphoria on the daily" has gotta be a real attitude-changer, and... having reclaimed his life... the CONCEPT of these boys attempting to live in a real house like normal humans do. Even just little things, like... bedroom doors, what the fuck.